good TV spot, but I think you need to remake it. You have it starting with Democrat praise and end with Charlie saying he’s a Republican. You need to leave the voters with the last thought being the opposite. Start with him saying he’s proud to be the party of Lincoln, then shred that claim to peices and end with Mathews praise for being a good Dem. Just flip the order of your clips and you’ll have a great ad.
good TV spot, but I think you need to remake it. You have it starting with Democrat praise and end with Charlie saying he’s a Republican. You need to leave the voters with the last thought being the opposite. Start with him saying he’s proud to be the party of Lincoln, then shred that claim to peices and end with Mathews praise for being a good Dem. Just flip the order of your clips and you’ll have a great ad.